Poetry - I just wrote a poem, and I'm not high.

[Mercer414]

Haha.
I was bored, and I just wrote this.

Drugs

God gave us gifts,
He gave them to us,
But you shut them down,
And call it a must.

When we ask for answers,
We get bullshit replies,
Like "we already know,
What you shouldn't try."

But we aren't all dumb,
Most know the ropes,
First start of small,
Then up the dose.

So rolls, or shrooms,
Pot or pills,
Illegal as fuck,
We do what we will.

Now we don't like breaking,
all of these laws,
But, god, it just makes us,
Feel good as balls.

So it doesn't matter,
What you think you know,
Wait...That's my dealer,
I've got to go....


-Michael Mercer







Thoughts?

Mercer414 added 45 Minutes and 10 Seconds later...

Errr.
the 'us' in the first line is supposed to be 'these'.


Could a mod change that?
thanks.

[Alexander_Praves]

Now we don't like breaking,
all of these laws,
But, god, it just makes us,
Feel good as balls.

That last line did make SWIM laugh. Or smile, rather.

[NotImportant]

This was actually really cool, good really. I like it.

[Sushi]

Originally Posted by Mercer414

But we aren't all dumb,
Most know the ropes,
First start of small,
Then up the dose.

This has given Alf a good inebriating laughter. Nice one, man.
He would rework the rhythm of it slightly but it's cool anyway.

[ONIT4LYF]

old skool "vegemite" song,daggy/funny. i am a little druggie, i love my L.S.D, heroin for breakfast, tybudda sticks for tea,my mummy gives me marijuana every single day, hash is great we love it mate, an thats why we are stoned all day.